Critique of Fluent Motion
The main focus of this shoot wasn’t to show poverty or anything like that, I’m just trying to show life at a peaceful moment unlike the world around us at this current moment. My focal point is the peace and tranquility in the world around us. The main focus is the water coming from the pipe and the nice gentle curve that is made from the water. The curve gives the entire shot a gentle sort of feel to it while at the same time there’s still this motion moving appearance to it making the picture still fun to look at. This photo is much different that anyone else’s in the fact that it actually portrays a calm yet moving subject. If I could change anything about the shot I probably wouldn’t, the black and white conversion was a great transfer and the sharpness is rather amazing. The fact still is, I’m not so convinced that this was the smart picture to turn in for the gallery. There really needed to be a different shot for this one I feel and that the class a whole may have cheated themselves out of a bit of shooting time so I mean there’s no really reason I couldn’t attempt more shots but there just wasn’t enough time to set up for models and or a ride to the location or even just a simple light or two to shoot with. Overall the shot didn’t turn out to bad for a fast quick shot. There needed to be more time.
